similes and repetition

Simile: comparing one thing to another using like or as

.......I ran as fast as a horse. 

Repetition: Repeating a word in a sentence to add effect

..... I yelled run, run, run to my friend as he was about to win the race. my narrative:
as the doggy advances to the ball it  get kicked into the pool the doggy jumps into the pool thinking gimme gimme gimme!he try's to get the ball but it winks at him and swims away!feeling irritated the dog swam like a fish and then... Dr doggy tried harder!